Blind hope-filled eyes

Well, short and sweet wins for me every time. You are able to cram everything you wish to say into such a short space you deserve credit. This is one of the things I struggle with the most - keeping everything compact.

You display beautiful emotion and such vivid images within just a few short lines. Well done.

My only real concern with this piece is the title, it's not the best entitled poem I've ever come across. I would possibly look at changing it to something like ..
Arduous
Living Blind
etc..
Something a little bolder.

Other than that a very nice poem.

~Pete.

Not a bad poem, to me it wasn't the best of yours but the emotion was still their. I loved the imagery yet again you portrayed in nicely and the message behind it deep and powerful. A good read which I enjoyed.

Overall well done a good poem. ~Mel

I enjoyed this.

Despite being relatively short, you managed to pack in so much depth and emotion.

The imagery was nicely portrayed, and I thought this was well written with such a deep meaning and insanely great message behind the words.

Another good one - I especially loved the ending. -Tara

I love how this poem goes with the other one.