Loveless

by Pete   Oct 7, 2007


Many years have passed;
at last you know she's the one.
Scenes of dreams from the past,
Now all opportunities gone.

To show that you know her,
and know what she wants.
Just on paper a rambler,
Take the gamble for once.

So give in to your torment,
Let your feelings be shown.
Time of waiting is now spent.
Hating the fact you're alone.

You served your time in hell,
didn't reveal your whole story.
Or put your point across well,
Welcome to loveless purgatory.

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  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    Omg, i loved this, it was such a brilliant piece, and you expressed it well. it was such an emotional piece, and very powerful. it was absolutely and completely flawless, you portrayed the message beautifully and it came across to me/the reader loud and clear, nice work. a def 5/5 from me

    nikki

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenna

    Another beautiful piece from you. you have such a powerful talent for writing! the words and flowage was wonderful, the message was wonderful as well, keep up the work hun!

    MickeysBabyGurl

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow a sad poem but i dont know what purgatory means other than that nice poem 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine.

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