This Mist

by shawn   Oct 8, 2007


What once was bliss
From just one little kiss
Has now faded away
In this haze of mist.

What once was a soft touch
From one loved so much
Has now gone astray
In this haze of mist.

What once was love
From two hearts that rose above
Has now become grey
In this haze of mist.

What is this mist you say?
Well i will tell you some day.
For right now i am still in woe.
The sole reason
Is that I do not know.

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  • 16 years ago

    by InFaTuAtEdMiSs

    I really like it all of it your style everything

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    Aww! That was so sad. I can relate to it too. I loved the word choice and the title and the meaning in the poem. Overall, Great Job! 5/5
    *~NearlyCrazy6~*

  • 16 years ago

    by omgitsmina

    I can totally relate to this poem. I've had some "mists" come into my relationships before.

    I like the rhyming, repitition, and symbolism used throughout the poem.

    Good job.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lets Keep it A Surprise

    Extremely sad yet true poem. Sometimes when something is empty, something mysterious filled it in, in this case mist.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Very well writen piece, it flowed wonderfully...and captures the emotion so well. (I'm curious, what's the mist?)

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