Never be the same

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 9, 2007


Pain
it dulls over time
with the tears you cry
but never goes away

I'll never feel the same
please tell me i'm not insane
Wish you could take away
this pain

I wander in the dark
beneath these stars tonight
wishing i could be ok
but i know i can never
be the same

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  • 16 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I didn't find this one to have the same depth as your other pieces which may be due to the length but it just felt that it lacked something that the others had. The flow was a bit off in places and I think the layout could do with a little work but otherwise it was a nice piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Great poem.