Inspiration for those who feel they can't go on

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 9, 2007


When the storms roll in
Our desire is to hide
When the going gets hard
We always wonder why
We tend to break and bend
And to hide our hurts within
And trip and fall
again
Its hard to stand tall
And sometimes when we do
We wonder why we tried
at all
You might feel hopeless
Like really giving up
But life can be worth it
Even when its tough
So hold your chin up
Show what your made of
You can make it
Even when you feel you can't go on
Take a step forward
Step up to the plate
Your life
AWAITS!!!!

Please comment on this one! I'm curious to see that people think!!

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  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Im spellbound my dear. This this not only a poem but a great encouragement and fostering to the ones who are discouraged and in depths of dispare. 5/5 all the way

  • 16 years ago

    by NearlyCrazy6

    I liked it
    i thought it was very inspirational and beautiful
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I think it is a well written piece of advice. Reading it brought to mind images of a good friend or relative doling out advice whilst providing a shoulder to cry on. I think most people will be able to relate to what you say in this piece and I for one found it inspiring.

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