Baby Ill Wait for You

by StormyStar   Oct 12, 2007


Baby ill wait for you
Ill wait no matter what you do
I just love you so much
I just have to feel your touch

Do you remember what you told me boo bear
How you promised youd always be there
I just hope when you get back youll still love me
Because ill wait forever if thats how long youll be

Remember you promised that you wouldnt ever hurt me
Cant they just let you go and just let you be
I trust you with everything and so much more
I remember the first day you came through that door

Ill never forget how big your smile was
I just hope what you feel isnt just lust
I dont know what I would do if I lose you
Because I love when you say I love you boo

To look in your eyes
Just gives me butterflies
My heart misses
Your sweet little kisses

I will look in to the night
I was afraid of the dark that you made light
You showed me fears in my mind
So I look for a way out and its you I find

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  • 16 years ago

    by Krysten

    I will look in to the night
    I was afraid of the dark that you made light
    You showed me fears in my mind
    So I look for a way out and its you I find

    these are my fav lines. im not sure if i like your rhyme scheam tho it took a little more to get my attention. but really all in all good word choice and go use of subject. i enjoyed it ....5/5 *oh and thnaks for the comment on mine*

  • 16 years ago

    by Fear2love

    I loooove the fifth paragragh,lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Loruhh

    Sounds like ur in love?
    lolz
    This is a very nice poem!
    If only my love was this strong!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fixxxer

    This is a sweet poem, I really hope you gave it to whoever it was intended for. Excellent write 5/5 -John stop reading if u dont like criticism, but I thought I'd mention this. When you're rhyming watch your flow. The key to good flow is matching your syllables. If you want try counting the syllables in each line and see if you find a consistent pattern. Reading aloud helps too. FYI I'm not a good poet I've just been told this before :P This poem still works perfectly though. Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    WOW... nice poem.. if this poem was dedicated to me.. I'd melt... good job!

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