One wish

by Tracy D Rollings   Oct 12, 2007


If I had one wish , you know what it would be
to spend my life with you for an eternity
and hold you tight so close to me
the way life was meant to be
love you forever, with all my heart
because I know , we'd never be apart
share the moments forever more
cause you are the one that I truly adore
you make me so happy I'm proud to say
I'll love you always , with you I'll stay
so take my heart and hold it tight
and I'll fade off to sleep , with a kiss goodnight..©2007 Tracydr42

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  • 16 years ago

    by monskie

    So Chui Man ;D

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaz

    Sweeet poemm.. ilike the ending.. its really sweett.. kissiing gudnite..hehe..

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Tracy this piece is absolutely beautiful!
    It is short but it has incredible rhythm and you truly put your self in it. You described so many emotions on the truly fantastic way.
    Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by DeepLife

    Wow
    I like the way you express your self in this
    poem...I can relate to how you feel.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is so beautiful and filled with greatly described feelings. Every line holds so much emotions.
    Truly beautiful and sweet love poem. I like the ending, because the rhythm of the poem slows down in last few lines which adds great effect to the whole piece.
    Keep writing!

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