I loved this. It was so sad and well written.

Amazing.
couldnt have said it better myself.
comment back please.

Hey this was really well done. Very very powerful. But one suggestion the last line sorta ruins the flow of the poem. Because everything else is a perfect rhyme and that one isnt. But other then that REALLY well done 5/5

WOW VERY VERY GREAT POEM!!!!!!!! like oh my god that was fantastically amazing I LOVED IT 999/10 lol it was just perfect!!!!

Love You Please Take Care

~Love Always Jessica~

WOW THIS IS AMAZING
2000 OUT OF 10
ITS BRILLIANT I WOULD LOVE IT IF TYOU CARRIED IT ON

Wow is amazing good job

Amazing!
i loved every word of it
the raw emotions
the need for death
outstanding!
keep it up!

Wow hun... it was so emotional.. 5/5... sometimes i feel that way too but you know what?! hang on! things will get better one day... or so i believe... life's a biach but we just have to take the ride..

Wow thats really powerful, well written and keep it up xxx

Wow really good loved it!

That was pretty good.. really sad and lots of emotion.

HOLY HELL! you are a great poet perfect flow i was actually left speechless for a couple minutes

Holy crap that was great sad but great i wiah u the best of luck in life

I LOVED IT. you have the perfect flow and I especially liked the end. 5/5
hugs from Em

Another amazing poem!!

A lovely poem indeed! well worded, i loved it.
sad, yet emotional. but i'm glad i read it. keep writing!