What Can I Say To You?

by DeepLife   Oct 13, 2007


Its amusing how I get so frustrated,
Because I want to say something wonderful.

I want to say something admirable,
But what words do I use to express myself?

If only you could read my mind,
It'd show you what I see that others can't.

I wish I could open my heart,
To splash you with a water fall of love.

People say "I Love You",
But thats not enough for me.

I could say I love you, admire you, adore you,
But will that capture what I feel for you?

Will you be able to embrace my love,
To understand me?

If not tell me,
I'll make it more graspable.

You are my truelove,
The one who is meant to stand by my side.

I'll do anything to try and please you.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Nelle

    I can relate to this one a lot. It was good, and your feelings came out wonderfully. Good job.

  • 16 years ago

    by PoEtiCmYme

    Great poem its truly someting ..... loved ur seting ****

  • 16 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    YEHA I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THIS POEM
    I THINK THE WORD LOVE DOESNT MEAN THE SAME ANYMORE, WHICH MEANS WE HAVE TO WORK ALOT HARDER.

    NICE 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Krathia

    People say "I Love You",
    But thats not enough for me.

    ^ My favorite lines. Nice work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very nice poem and great wordings. I love the way it flows and its so meaningful. You might change the line "I wish I can/could open my heart,"

    5/5 keep it up
    Tc
    Fsams