My Suicide

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 14, 2007


Slicing through
purple veins
in my trembling
arm
Blood trickles
then flows
and before i know it
its almost gone
I feel my strength
leave my body
I stumble then I
fall
I tried to live
I really did
Despite the help
It wasn't enough
I gave up tonight
Without saying goodbye
Beacues goodbyes
hurt too much
So there i lay
on the floor
against my door
letting my black blood pour some more
My eyes close
As my heart slows
I feel my last bit of strenght
go
Blackness surrounds me
My eyes blank
I feel my soul
dissipate
No feeling no life
no pain
no strife
Thats what i felt
that night when i ended my
life....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hannah Mhairi

    Great job, yet again:)
    I really like suicide poems so yeah 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by MeeyCie

    Good poem, I like the emotions, like the pain and all. I just love the sad ones and this was sad, AND powerfull. Good work and keep it up =)

  • 16 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Awesome job. I liked it. Good emotion. keep up the good work.

    And thank you for the comments on mine.

  • 16 years ago

    by Illusion

    This is very very well written. I think everyone has gone through that struggle of trying to live, get over it & forget about it...and a lot of people just can't and end it. You are very talented. Good job.

    5/5

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