by Mimmi Oct 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
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***This poem is about the boy who showed me that love really exist in this world, it's my first poem I've ever written so I would really like it if you would comment it :)*** |
by Mike Martin
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This is really good for your first poem. And yes, there is love in you, never forget that...You will get over this and no, you won't forget the last kiss...5/5....xoxoxo |
by Mike Martin
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This is really good for your first poem. And yes, there is love in you, never forget that...You will get over this and no, you won't forget the last kiss...5/5....xoxoxo |
by Not
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For this to be your first poem its a good one my favor part was""You walked into my Life, when my world was dark and cold, |
by Keith
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This is very good and deep, even better considering english may not be your 1st language. comment back pls :) |
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WOW this poem is like really good. you have great talent. Keep writing |