Trying to let you go

by Mimmi   Oct 14, 2007


***This poem is about the boy who showed me that love really exist in this world, it's my first poem I've ever written so I would really like it if you would comment it :)***

You walked into my Life, when my world was dark and cold,
you held out your arms, and my heart and soul you did hold.
You promised you would never leave, that you would always be there,
I never knew that I meant so much, that my heart was worth enough to care.

You showed me so many things, I began to think about you every night,
you melted the coldness in my heart, with the warmth of your light.
I ended up falling for you, how could I not??

Today, when I think about all the things we went trough
I can't believe it's over, I can't belive that there will never be me and you
I'm trying my hardest to understand that it would never last
And all the pain that we both been trough, I'm now trying to leave in the past

You were the only one how chould make me see
That there was love in me.
So now I just hope that some day I will get over this
So I can find some one else to miss..

But I can't deny, that I will always miss.. that last kiss..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    This is really good for your first poem. And yes, there is love in you, never forget that...You will get over this and no, you won't forget the last kiss...5/5....xoxoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    This is really good for your first poem. And yes, there is love in you, never forget that...You will get over this and no, you won't forget the last kiss...5/5....xoxoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    For this to be your first poem its a good one my favor part was""You walked into my Life, when my world was dark and cold,
    you held out your arms, and my heart and soul you did hold."" that is so sweet keep writing not many people can do gd long poems but you did so keep writing hope to see more of you!!!....=)

  • 16 years ago

    by Keith

    This is very good and deep, even better considering english may not be your 1st language. comment back pls :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Im So OVER IT

    WOW this poem is like really good. you have great talent. Keep writing

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