A wakening promise

by Ron   Oct 15, 2007


Feelings long ago forsaken,
have now begun to waken.
A blazing fire in my heart,
I cannot even begin to thwart.

Standing before me an angel,
her piercing gaze so cordial.
A vision of tranquil desire,
so peaceful as to inspire.

Her pure smile began to shine,
held a heavenly glow Divine.
Has started to patch the hole,
that had grown so in my soul.

Do I dare accept this love,
for this angel from above.
Dare I to the chance of pain,
or is life alone my bane.

But thoughts of her I am cursed,
for to my heart she has traversed.
with this new love I am cautious,
but love her till the end I promise.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Fave stanza:

    "Her pure smile began to shine,
    held a heavenly glow Divine.
    Has started to patch the hole,
    that had grown so in my soul."

    an inspiring piece of amazing poetry. well written in every way possible 5/5 keep writing!!

    xD Happy Thoughts xD
    As Always,
    ~NinjaGirl~

  • 16 years ago

    by chiildhoodMEMOiiRS x

    Herrow.

    Love this poem,
    You’re very gifted
    =]

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    Kim Ke, _______<&*]]

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    I can really relate to this poem. I think the emotion is hidden but after each stanza it opens up and thats what makes this poem unique. Well penned and Well Done!!!!!

    My favourite stanza was: Feelings long ago forsaken,
    have now begun to waken.
    A blazing fire in my heart,
    I cannot even begin to thwart.

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