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by Poet on the Piano
Written very nicely, I will comment on all your new ones.
This is a very good poem alex, i love how it portrays like a fairy-tale, and the flow is absolutely flawless, not sure but i think here may be a typo in line 23, i give this a perfect 5/5!!!
by lil ashie
This poem is very nice and i like it the way youve picked it up from a disney film i lurrrff disney keep it up XD
by Anonymous Angel
an beautiful poem, just like in the fairy tale,
the poem flows nicely and I enjoyed reading it. uhm I don't know anything else to say...except for nice work! 5/5
Really liked this poem. Flow and rhymes great as usual. 5/5
by Karl Wild GG23
Perfect example of how looks truly don't mean a thing, they have absolutely nothing to do with what is going to make you happy. a very excellent heart felt poem, truly unique - great job as always 5/5 GG23
Amazing poems. Loved it!!! Must be 5/5!!! You inspired me to write new ones!
by Vincent Thornsberry
Wow, i got goosbumps reading this one. VERY well written. the emotional level was almost over whelming. But it was great. if i could ide give you a 10/5
by Jaymes Haze
Unlike most poems, I didn't get the sense of getting deeper and deeper within this poem.
Although beautifully conveyed it didn't have that sense. (I hope you understand what I'm talking about)
All up until that last line, it was a fantastic one, and shows that beauty is obviously in the eye of the beholder.
by BrOkeN HeArt Can kill
Wow ii love this poem! && ii love the movie! make a poem about the little mermaid ariel please =)