Woah, woah, woah.

This was truely tremendous lol.
Know i really loved it, all cute and innocent. i never wanted it to end. Really great, all happy and joyful, very magical. Definately 5/5, brightened up my day:)

Kelly
xx

I luv this poem. i think its probably one of the best on here. I wish my world was like tht!

Wow gem ya did it again

great i love it

YOU AMAZING!
ARE !

gem its sophisticated yet great for little girls! its well amazing!

I love it

i really love it

Nice job
i loved it

I love the way you describe the magical world little girls live in.
It's a beautiful poem, nice flow.

Best wishes,

5/5 Ingrid

I keep telling you how wonderful and amazing you write. You have incredible talent to turn anything simple and ordinary into a beautiful masterpiece.

Great job.

Wow that was amazing i love this poem

Wow that was a really good poem loved it great job!

You have a typo on the first line of your second to last stanza. LOL Confused yet?! Other than that, this poem was GREAT! This was really good. It brought fairytales to life again for all of us that are older than ten! It was really good!
*ME*

The reason I chose this poem as a winner is because It is SO sweet, It reminds me of something like Mary Poppins or Bednobs and Broomsticks, It was so imaginative. BRILLIANT poem xxx alex xxx

Love it! would love if you voted and commented on my new poems

Wow, awesome. Every words are really beautiful together. Excellent piece!

Congratulations on the spotlight!

Enchanting and wonderful

Great job reali like it

I LOVE IT!! iIts ah-dorable!

Gem
Congrats:) R.T.V.W. Is very proud of you!
Love Cindy

This was awesome :). I really like how it's not confined to the 'love' genre yet could fit into it. I thought the rhyming could be worked on a little bit, maybe just so the syllable count is more even. But apart from that I thought this was fantastic. The imagery is really amazing, I really felt you brought this 'dreamworld' to life for the readers. What a picturesque fantasy :) Well done.

Butterfly Kisses...Gem, Gem...You do know about the website? For women attracted to adolescent girls. Kinda disturbing, yeah.

Anyway, great poem. I dig.

Wonderful Write, Enjoyed, Superlatively Written!!!