Life Support

by marilyn marti   Oct 16, 2007


You are the beat..that pumps my heart
You are the dawning of every start
You are the breath..that keeps me here,
and all the courage to face my fears
You are the arms that help me stand
You are the soul that understands
What I see is because of you,
you are what always pulls me through.

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  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    Hmm not very good poem there, here's y, n this is subjective cuz my personal opinion:
    too short n dunno y cudn't take wat u were sayin seriously. i mean that the feelings u describe in there don't really sound real, cuz it's too much.. but i'm maybe wrong maybe this guy is all of this to u, n if he is, then he's lucky to get that kind of poem from u. maybe a bit harsh but rated u 2/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Awww how cute... i like this one... 5/5

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