Make me or Break me

by marilyn marti   Oct 16, 2007


You could make me or break me,
my fate is in your hands..
I wish that I could hold you..
I wish you'd understand.

I need you in my life..
I need you all for me..
If you told me you love me,
it would really set me free.

You make me happy,
in so many different ways..
I wish to hold you close..
I wish that you could stay.

There's so much inside you,
Such beauty in your eyes..
Do you know how deep you've touched me?
Could you ever realize?

I've never felt this way,
and it's so hard to ignore.
All I want is your love,
It's all that I implore.

The sound of your voice,
is like a perfect song..
I hope to hear it soon,
I hope it lasts long.

You don't know how strong I feel,
you don't know how much I care.
But not having you with me,
could make my heart tear...

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  • 16 years ago

    by reborn

    At first i only liked the first 2 paragraphs, but then when i read it again i started to notice more the feelings u were describing instead of looking at the rimes. so i would say that feelings wise, n story wise this is a good poem, but rimes wise u've accustomed be to better... 3/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Awwww this one is cute also but a better cute i like this one more... LOL! i like the way you thought of this the way you did and the way you wrote and put the stanzas ... its a great.