Something.

by Birgit   Oct 17, 2007


This is just something I wrote.. when I was feeling down. I was actually just singing something random, and than I wrote it down. And this came out.

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Hide your bruises with a little make-up and pretend you're OK.
It doesn't matter what you do or say,
Cause at the end it's still the same.
No matter what I do,
It's gonna be this way.
And I just want, for once in my life,
For once to feel safe,
But at the end of the day,
It's still too much to take.

And I all wanted you to be,
Was a different mother, for me.
And every time you're always on my mind,
I try to make you leave,
Try to figure out, why it is this way.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    For somethin that you just came up with in a short time, it is really good. the flow and wording were really good. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by cass

    Gr8 poem very deep.....nice! !!! ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I really like the opening line of this poem - it's really strong. Just like you said in the beginning(sp) it came from your heart, well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Zima Ultifera

    Birgit!
    Although this was not your best ever, I tend to love everything you write :O

    You keep amazing me with every words you get down on paper!

    ^^
    (L)