Love is wonderful thing

by DragonRebornedInBrokenMirror   Oct 17, 2007


I love her!

Her blood is on my hands,
my eyes tell the story of the sky,
and all angels dies in this week
because my father is hungry
he told me to be a soul eater

I am THE SOUL EATER!!!

The devil told me to shout you,
so, of course, I killed you.
And then I cried, it hurts you, my smile...

I love you, and you don't care!!!

My heart is filled with power of night,
and we scream and we whisper...

My alter ego is really COOL guy...
And you love him, and I hate this stars,
so I bought a gun, again!!!

The jail of fire is my home,
so sweet feelings I have for you,
and my white wings match your red song...

I love her!

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  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    A very eccentric piece, the choppy nature of the poem really suited to the message I believe you were trying to convey. Just a reminder to always double check your poem because we all tend to miss a simple little word here and there, but only a minor infraction. Good piece!

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ReaD youR writinG witH a deeP pleasurE. writE morE anD givE uS youR betteR tidinG tO enjoyR youR expressionS witH fulL oF confidencE.... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by AMoreMIo

    Well ..i really like your expressions and your emotions...i mean i dont quite understand it..i wish i could..bc its such a unique poem..and it seems so interesting..well i like your structure and imagery
    -alicia

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