Hm tis a very good poem kaila, i love how it flowed, the only thing i saw that could be changed is the capitalization of the k in the title, ex: I Know, and also line 5? but overall this tis a wonderfull poem ad i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

The poem is completely and totally lonesome.. gloomy indeed.. i know how it feels, i like how to the ambiance and the emotions jives, so as the imagination.. but honestly, i know you can give more than this. you can actually, write your imagination, ideas and thoughts plus the emotion without repeating the word "i know .."(though i know the title already has a clue) because threw me a little off.. hope i didn't offend you. keep up the good work.

Saddening. I do not believe love is fake, and it pains me to think you believe so. I believe the love we see in movies and media is fake, as you describe in this poem.

May be thats true with love.
even i believe in what you ssay

may be we are wrong and i just want me to be wrong this time
neways
illstop my words
5/5 u deserve

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I know there is no glass slipper I know its all a joke,
` Add a ; or , between "slipper" and "I" since the "I know it's all a joke" is a somewhat different idea from the glass slipper. Without a comma or anything, it doesn't make sense as a whole sentence.

I know the books and movies lye about this love stuff,
`lie. LYE is a highly concentrated, aqueous solution of potassium hydroxide or sodium hydroxide.

I know that when you brush past me I feel so alone and cold,
`Watch when you're using his, he, etc. and then switching to second person in the middle of a poem.

Overall, I'd give it a four out of five. I'm all for repeating, but sometimes it just gets overrused. I feel that you could've expressed some of the feelings without using four "I know"'s in one stanza. The idea behind it is great, but some of the word choice just made it cliche and blurry, and a couple of the rhymes seem forced. It wasn't though, a bad poem. In fact, it somewhat appealed to me.

Keep it up, though. I've read a couple of your other poems before. This just wasn't one of your best.

This is the way I feel sometimes..no, almost all the time. I am so glad that someone has put it in such good words.

The emotion was strong and powerful, the word choice was excellent except for a couple of rhymes felt a little forced whirl-girl. other than that nicely penned, dark, and gloomy, keep up the good work 5/5

Good poem, but it had too much repetition of the same word. It's a good poem though. There were a couple of grammar errors. Good job. 4/5

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Wow this poem is so true. straight to the point. the flow was excellent. it kept my intrests through the whole thing

Hmm I KNOW this is so true.. i love ur style... this i very marvelous work.. i really enjoyed the way u keep repeating the words... love it 5/5

Oh my this was so deep and just touched me. I loved the repitition, it really got your message across. I love how you adressed the cliches movies talk about and how you fit in the way he makes you feel. Well done *5/5*

Wow, I LOVE this poem, flows so beautifully and the word choice is awesome too, I couldnt take my eyes away. Beautifully written, and it flows really well. Keep writing!!