I'm Hurt

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 19, 2007


Dead inside
Never was alive
Born with
A broken heart

I never was alive
Even though my
heart beat

I was always cold
Never warm
I was always crying
Never laughing

You think I'm crazy
You think I'm messed up
But truth is
I'm just hurt

I'm hurt from lies
I'm hurt from words
I'm hurt from hate
I'm hurt from you

I was born broken
I was bron dead
I was born crying
And shall be till I'm dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Great job.. i love the repetition and it shows really great emotion. you are really good at getting your feelings across.. great job! keep it up!!! :o]

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Good passion and feeling in this poem. You wrote very strong words and statements, although some of them were cliche. There are many different ways to express what you were trying to convey. Good work though!

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    This is really good too, i can relate to this poem. it flows really well and the structure well set out, i like this a lot especially the lines-
    'I'm hurt from hate
    I'm hurt from you ' good stuff
    5/5

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