Trying To Be Me

Nice work :)

There is a lot of frustrated anger in this poem. I enjoyed its beat and found myself reading it out loud in an aggresive tone, almost spitting the words at some parental figure, perhaps!!? Imagining them cowering at my words of distaste, while you demand answers to your question....the sad reality is though, that these words are festering inside and not delivered to those thay are intended for.

A very good piece, one that sounds great when spoken out loud.

Well done

Michael

Very nice... straight from the heart! Enjoyed it!

Great job
This poem is very good
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You written it so wonderfully. Great write 5/5.