This one is pretty good, but not the greatest one that i have read. some of the rhyming seemed forced. but overall good message and feeling! :o]

Really sad poem. Nobody should be treated like that. I really loved it. Definately on my fav. poems.

5/5

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I think you need to relax a little, i like the poem but you should be more relaxed around sharing your friend let go and if she comes back you know she/he for real xxx alex xxx

This poem has a really good meaning, but isn't expressed very uniquely-- some changes in vocabulary would definitely improve this poem.

It's not bad, it just.. doesn't stand out because the words are so basic. Then again, I'm very picky with vocabulary.

4/5 Great meaning behind the words.

This one was good. The emotions were ones I could understand and even though the vocabulary was basic, the emotions were real which is why I gave it a *5/5*

Yep sum friend but you gotta move on there are more people more Friends out there who are honest and understanding jus pick em right
fantastic poem i love it
Take Care
xHSx

I love this and I so know what you mean

I really like this poem..
I know exactly how you feel..i have a friend like that 2..
But yeah i really liked it..=]

I have had trouble with people lately and i know how you feel. for me though i think i'd be the friend for me it is a different story. She was the most annoying person i knew. i show her one bit of realism and she acts like a leach.

ok so that is not your story but it made me think of it
good job
Sam Mayo

The vocab is simple but I think you pulled it off effectively. The flow was great the meaning behind it was simply sad and you portrayed it in a depth which spilled your emotions out onto the page. I liked this one alot and found it to be heartfelt. ~Mel

You seem to have a lot of probelms with girls.. or at least all your poems are about them.. idk.. you really knw how to to put a lot of emoiton into words.. great job

5/5