Left me

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 23, 2007


Empty eyes
you now realize
you ignore the signs
that i am hurting inside
won't you listen
and hold me close
aren't you the one
who loves me the most
my closest friend
my kindrid spirit
you left me when
you saw the change
now i wonder
who will
be here for me
Empty eyes
dead soul
you never bothered
to see
you only left me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Oy.
    This poem was amazing... especially since I can relate to it quite a bit right now. :]] A wonderful poem about betrayal -- I love it. <3 Overall: 5.5

    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Good poem. Kind of short, but I like it.

    5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    This one is really good! i loved it and the way it rhymed.. awesome job!!!!!! i enjoyed reading it! :0]

  • 16 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good. Very simple easy flowing and easy to believe. I thought it was great. Although it could have been a bit more creative, and have a twist to it somewhere. But great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    There is alot of betrayal in this piece but not a lot to let your reader understand or have any background to your being distraught. I think if you gave more infomation to the reader this would be the powerful piece you intended it to be Plot121

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