Love gone forever part II

by Melvin LeVeque   Oct 23, 2007


Today I painted a picture here cant you see.
It shows how we could have been together, you and me.

I really wish I wouldn't have ended my life.
But you should have seen all the promise that I saw in that knife.

Killing myself wasn't really the right thing to do.
But I couldn't escape the pain of me loving you.

And when you didn't love me back it really did hurt.
It made me feel lower than even the sand and dirt.

So what were you thinking when you heard that they found me in my bed?
Did you even care when the medics gave up and pronounced me dead?

I can't stop thinking what could have been.
Oh what I would give for now to be then.

But Jesus has been helping me a lot, very much so
And he says sometimes the ones we love, we just have to let go.

So I'm writing you to this letter today to say.
It's getting better, a little more each day.

Even though I'm looking toward the light
I can't explain how bad I regret what I did in my bed that night.

Even though I'm dead I feel like I'm still dying.
Every time I even think of you I start crying.

And when I remember how beautiful you are
Man my knees go weak.
Then I wipe all the tears that are rolling down my cheek.

And I don't really want to shed so many tears.
But I still do love you after all these years.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    They say a true love will never die no matter how much time passes. But I say if you truly love her as much as your poems portray, you should never kill your self and just live life happy you experienced this true love because most people never get the chance.. great job

  • 15 years ago

    by Kaitlyn Gilbertson

    Haha, just thought id comment.. and im not trying to be a smart ass.. but if your with jesus...you shouldnt be crying. [:

    Uhm, its an alright poem.. nice flow. and kudos to you for being able to rhyme. i always sound pathetic when i try..

    Haha, i can totally relate to this.. and the first one.
    kaitlyn.

  • 15 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is such a beautiful poem. Loved the lines and the emotions are flowing over like a river. Gone forever......such a grief...:(

  • 15 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is such a beautiful poem. Loved the lines and the emotions are flowing over like a river. Gone forever......such a grief...:(

  • 15 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is such a beautiful poem. Loved the lines and the emotions are flowing over like a river. Gone forever......such a grief...:(

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