My sacrifice

by Kyle   Oct 25, 2007


I cut my heart out for her to smile,
i stomp my heart in the ground,
the blood soaked up in the dirt

theres my love for her,
just a stain in the dirt,
she smiles still

she walks away into the arms of another,
i cry watching her go
i gave her my heart, but she made me destroy it

she smiles as she stares into his eyes,
i fall to the ground
i die as she smiles with him

but she smiles,
and i gave my heart
what is love without sacrifice?

i know it sucks...but i just felt so much emotion that i didnt care if it sucks...as long as i got it out. so yeah

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  • 16 years ago

    by divine divinity

    Beautifully true. you really touched on the reality of love. :( sad face coz its sad but :) happy face coz its good. well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by xFallenAngelx

    Aww wow theres so much emotion in his poem i lovved it, i know its a sad poem, but i thought it was great.. good job buddy

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "I cut my heart out for her to smile,
    i stomp my heart in the ground,
    the blood soaked up in the dirt"

    These packed the most emotion to me, but the poem overall was fabulous! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jesyka Vendetta

    It didnt suck man i liked it! it makes me think of something i've been through quite a few times. well with like 2 different guys but whatever! hehe it was good tho!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kali

    Awww this makes me sad =(

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