You never loved me

by xXxemzxXx   Oct 25, 2007


You never loved me
To you i was just a chore
If you knew you would never love me
Then why help create me

Why did you ditch us
For another family
We were your kids
You were our father

Did you ever stop to think
Of the pain you would cause
Of course you didn't
Because you think of no other

It wasn't a surprise to find out
You were gone
I hadn't seen you around in so long
I only cared a little

I suppose after a while
I stopped caring at all
Then you were there again
As if you gave a damn

But i knew the truth
As to why you were gone
You acted as if you never did anything wrong
As if you went to blame

Now I'm happy
Your out of my life
I just hope
You wont come back

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    U can write good, dead beat fathers, huh. A lot of emotions, careless love of a hope. U beat that feelings, neva bother you until finally felt free out of sadness at young ages. I really like this 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    I don't like ending, also, you used-I- and -you- too many times in this poem and that ruined the flow.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Good descriptions of emotions but I think the language was a bit simple. There were parts were you said the same thing you said before but in different words and that threw off the flow for me. All in all *4/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Awww sad but it has true feelings and i love that. great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Melvin LeVeque

    I can really really relate to this poem, very good 5/5

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