Valor Power

by Gasttlee   Oct 25, 2007


Courage colors
all creatures everywhere.

Minds
move as air.

Hearts grip hidden fear
and push through
like a rolling stone.

Demons die
inside out.

Particles of power
pull through threat.

You’re a force
forged like a sword
waning off forbidden strikes.

Courage comes clear
as clashes calm.

Clashes cause fear
and fear fizzles,
for you hold spirit.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Twobit

    That is definitely encouraging! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Aussie

    Sadly it's true. it made me think:)

    *thax for the comment*

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Gasttlee
    Another unique piece by you. Very thought provoking.

    Clashes cause fear
    and fear fizzles,
    for you hold spirit.

    This was my favorite part. Great work!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    I like the way this flow, you make it easy to rhyme and gives power a new meaning in each line.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Excellent poem, you created truly powerful rhythm in it and it has some special effective tone. You expressed thoughts in whole piece on fantastic way. Well done, it absolutely deserves 5/5

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