Reminders

by xXxemzxXx   Oct 26, 2007


My pillow wet from tears
Because of the reminders
That come along
After so many years

Bad memories
i try to erase
But the sadness and pain
Starts to follow and chase

Smiles hide my tears
Nobody can wash away all my fears
Days fly by
Nights go slow

In my dreams
You make my pain and suffering grow
Nightmares each night
All these memories I'm trying to fight

If only i was strong enough
To put it all behind me
But no
These nightmares just keep reminding me!

<3 emz

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting poem, you wrote it nicely but if you use some metaphors it would be a lot better and atmosphere could be much deeper with better choice of words.
    Anyway, that is just my opinion.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was amazing!
    I loved everything about it. It was real easy for me to relate to it which made it more of a joy to read. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by ChezziieePopszz xGHETTO GIRLx

    Mad az poem i can relate i also love the way yu have worded iiht...iiht is very sad but very true.. my past just wont leave me the hell alone

    GREAT WORK AND POETRY SKILLS

    [5/5] also

    xx chez

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Really nice dark poem, you highlight how our past always comes back to prey on our minds.

    One thing I really like about this poem is the rhyme structure - I like how the rhyming lines move about in each stanza. Very unique and adds a nice twist to it.

    Nice work

    [5/5]
    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    Luv this poem i can relate to it i try and forget the past and move on but everyday it just comes back :P
    i luv the way you worded it and it was very emotional great work

    5/5

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