How i feel

by xXxemzxXx   Oct 27, 2007


Why do you judge me
And compare me to another
I'm one of a kind
So don't even bother!!

You say you love me...
But never that your proud
I wish you would say it
And say it loud!

But no your ashamed
Because of all my problems
And for all yours
I am blamed...

I keep so many secrets
Because i don't know what you'll say
Will you listen??
Or will you just turn your back and walk away??

This is how I feel
But i want you to know
No matter what
Ill always love you though!!

<3 emz

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Damn, that was deep, truly deep emotions. A lot of good flow! U are good poet!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very honest poem, you expressed your feelings greatly and it is a hard topic to write about. Honestly, I don't want to offend you, but I personally don't like this piece too much.

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    This was filled with true emotions and I could truly feel the hurt and pain. I do think it could have flowed better and the last sentence kinda of threw me off. All in all it was a good poem. *4/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow...i could feel the raw emotions in this poem! great job and nice flow. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Love it! Very simple but flowing with emotions....well written and expressed well too.....oh, yeah, and thanks for the comments on mine!!! :)
    Keep writing!

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