Tear...

Simply great and I can relate to this one. Keep up the good work. Must be 5/5 from me!!!

Thank You. My children are my world. But there was a time when I was lost to other things. And I know I can never make up for it but I can make the future much better.

The expression of love is felt in every word you have written. Keep the faith and love within your heart.

sadaddy

This poem is very touching... well-written and very emotional... I love it. 5/5

Aw :( That was beautiful. Very personal & extremely touching. I love the way you've written it. Its sweet but at the same time strong. The only thing I noticed was a spelling mistake ('thought' instead of 'though'). Keep it up...

Alyssa. x

Well written where is your little girl

Aww that iz so adorably cute! keep up great worx!
xoxo
-d :)

I loved this poem..and i know that she would love it too, sounds like you love your daughter and your son more than anything in the world