Life suckes

by Cobra   Oct 29, 2007


As dark as the night
So is my soul
Nowhere to go
Nowhere to soar.

There is a few ways out
But what good will it do
To take my own live
Will also not do.

The one I love
I can not have
As there will always be
Someone in my way.

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  • 16 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    Fantastic poem! Love the flow of this. Once again, just watch your tenses:
    "There is a few ways out"
    Should be "There are a few ways out"
    And your title of your poem: Life Suckes should be Life Sucks.

    Keep up the awesome progress!!!!

    Josie

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