Liquid Desire

by Georgi   Oct 29, 2007

She carries hair like blackened sins,
And subtle lines of crimson twins.
A softer blush across her bones
Electrifies her pale tones.

Protection lay in perfect shape
Above the holes where tears escape,
While endless drops of liquid trust
Fall like spears of crystal dust.

A heart of sewed up golden lace,
Reveals love through one embrace,
As eyes of steel in sockets bare
Deflate her lungs of sour air.

She yearns for his outstanding kiss,
To be held close in wondrous bliss.
But dreams are held for when she sleeps,
And not for shattered hearts to keep.


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  • 12 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    This poem had amazing flow and the words were absolutely breathtaking! great job this is a 10/5 for sure :DDD cant wait to read some more of your poems.

  • 12 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    The last stanza of this blew my mind.
    It is amazing how people keep to their dreams, to hide from the pains reality brings.
    tehe, what do ya know, that rhymed.
    rhyming or not, its true.
    amazing and beautiful
    your choice of words to rhyme were stunning, especially how everything flowed together into one complet story.


  • 12 years ago

    by Georgi

    Hey britt, you were right, it didnt. i changed it =] thanks for your advice

  • 12 years ago

    by Alisha

    Awesome. simplay awesome. 5/5