This is nice exploration of the mask theme. I like the play of words flow of the story.

Nice word choice and great flow!Really drew me in!

Awesome!! I loved your choice of words! This poem was really really good! 5/5 <3

Omg this was an amazing write! again the story is wonderful. You can feel the passion in your words. this poem can be very relatable to many people i think we have all felt trapped under a "mask" before i know i can relate well great job a well deservered 5/5

laura

Wow. Just Wow. I love the uniqueness of this poem. It was really interesting. I like the idea of the poem, and the rhyming is also very impressive. I really enjoyed reading this one. GREAT job. I will definitely add it to my favs :)
Keep it up&
&Take care

5/5

Excellent!

For this one, i can see curiosity and concealed things..You truly describe your topic well. The words of choice for me is not so simple and so deep but it just truly fits on your style of writing.

Keep it up!

Hmm this one is a sap piece,, the whole stanza made me feel so sad. its all i can say........... very powerful imagery of urs keep it up man.. 5/5

Nicely written Poem. I loved the rhymes and the structure of the poem. The flow was very good. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Well this poem really deserves a perfect 5! :) I love your style in writing. I also love the title of this poem. Flow was smooth. Keep up the good work.

This was a very nice poem.
the emotion was well captured.
and wording was amazing.
the format was good.
and the imagery was outstanding. :]
definitely 5/5.

GOSH another GRRREEEAAATTTTTTT POEM!! it had niice flow and it was definitly one of ur best! good work! 5/5

Wow that was just amazing.
I really liekd the flow and the message you
put through with this. Wonderful.
Thank you for the comment on my poem.
:) 5/5
<3Tay

Loved this poem!!
You pretty much described me!
5/5!!!