Just One

by 0BrokenBella0   Oct 30, 2007


If I could have just one day
I'd drive a hundred miles
I would go to each end of earth
Just to see you smile.

If I could have just one moment
I'd tell you how I feel
I would look into your eyes
Just so you know it's real.

If I could have just one second
I'd give you one last kiss
I'm done trying to understand
How you could leave me here like this.

And if I could have forever
I just want you to know
That I'd always be with you
And I'd never let you go.

2007

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  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Nice write, it feels like something I would write. So emotional and heartfelt. The only thing I would advice you to do on this poem is add punctuation. Punctuation is very important in poetry, it allows the reader to know when to pause or stop as well as adding to the overall flow of the poem.

    Overall a wonderful write, keep up the great work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by Pamela G

    Very sweet and so cute. Lovely.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love this poem, it is so sweet!!

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I like this piece. It's sweet and simple, and from the heart. It's really good. I would suggest fixing the typos that the site put on it though. I know I sound crazy, but look it up on the site. It's got all kinds of weird symbols in it.
    :)
    *ME*

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