Gone forevermore....

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 31, 2007


Coffin
grave
she was too late
to save

Dead
Death
gone
with the rest

another lost life
down beneath dirt
gone forever
because of hurt

Ache
undending
pain
constanly
bending

their hearts hurt
but they'll learn
that life gets better
without her

She's plae and lifeless
still and silent
a ghost
forevermore

A lost soul
is what she became
that night
when she fell into her blood
pooled on the floor

That night I died
behind locked doors
forgotten by all
forevermore

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  • 16 years ago

    by lostsoul13

    This is an awesome poem. its definitely one of your best. your on my fave authors list. just keep on writin and ill keep on readin!!

  • 16 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey! Good Poem! I really like the last stanza especially!
    Well Done! xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Definately pretty hard hitting, the topic of death is always a pretty emotional one for anybody who has lost people close to them. But I liked this one I thought it was different and unique in a good way. Try and capitalize the first letter of a new word on each new line - and always capitalize your I's. Great work 5/5 GG23

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