Titles should be optional

by Resplendant Rose   Oct 31, 2007


Isn't it so odd
how one moment you're so sure
of your hopes
your dreams
but most of all your love

Then suddenly
you're plunging down
into shadow
dark despair
and so much confusion

And the only thing
you can be sure about
is that you're not
sure of anything
you're just floating lost

No matter how many people
try to save you
they cannot reach
no device
nor rope will help now

Except a noose about your neck
tight enough to squeeze
grabbing you like hands
cutting off
all your mind's circuits

sending you spiraling
d
o
w
n
into endless black

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    I love this! Its exactly how I feel.....so many poeple can relate to this. Keep up the good wrok!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5

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