Lost

by broken   Oct 31, 2007


My heart is racing,
You ask why,
All i want to do is cry

I'm so confused,
I'm lost inside,
I'm trying hard just to hide

I'm barely breathing,
Holding on,
To what i know is almost gone

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  • 16 years ago

    by ilovenicole

    Wow... that was acually really good

  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    I like it :) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by hersheykiss54672

    That was so amazingly good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hatori

    Sammy,
    Great poem! The flow was great and it made sense! ^_^ I understand the feelings in this poem, and it truly describes some of my feelings, y'know?
    Well, I have nothing to critisize, so keep it up! 5/5 ^_^

    With all due respect,
    Hatori
    IWannaBeANinja

    P.S. If you get a chance, could you please read, rate, and comment one of my poems?
    Thanks!

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