I enjoy in your poetry so much...
Another one touching, breathtaking piece from you.
The flow is flawless in the whole poem, and emotions are excellently portrayed. I like your rhymes a lot, they're not typical which added great effect to the flow of the poem.
Keep up!

This was such a beautifully sad piece Tim. I adored it, the emotion portrayed simply took my breathe away. This was a touching poem which gripped onto my heart. Definitly a favorite of from you. Very good poem. Loved it. ~Mel

Beautiful, tragic... i'm.. amazed..
You're story... is like that of my Mystie..

Wow, so very tragic, yet so tragically common in these days. I pray the particular girl you speak of will soon discover light in the storm. 5/5

:( She has tried to live her life unrestrained
The lines in her once beautiful face have aged
She cant go on without constant pain
The reminder of uncontrolled rage"

fav lines, hey thanks for the dance! I really liked this poem, I can kinda relate which always sucks me in when im reading something, anyhow It kept my attention, loved your choice of words too :) keep it up!

Hey Timothy,
Great poem!! Its been forever since we last talk. Do you talk to Jess anymore? Its nice to know that I'm not on your favs anymore :'( after all we've been friends for ummm like five years now. Well anyways read my poems, by the way I'm getting married!!! His names Robert and he's the best guy ever. Well talk to you later

Love ya
Kala Dearing Turner.

Heartbreaking...

Beautifully conveyed my dear friend.
I don't even know what else to say, I'm pretty speechless if you can believe that, lol.
Love ya, Holly

Very nice. It's sad that this ends up being the case for so many young girls who are the victim of abuse. This is a topic close to my heart and you did a good job with your prose.

For some reason I feel like I've read this before...I checked to see if I wrote you about it but I didn't...maybe I read this while passing by. Not sure. So sad...but so true for people all of the world. It hurts my feelings to think about it...but you put it into words so nicely! :)