That Moment - not finished

by Alicia Jane   Nov 3, 2007


Its her moments when she feels down,
and no one can turn her frown around.
Its a moment when the world stops,
and no one seems to even care.
Its a moment when her heart breaks,
and she cant find that damn sticky tape.

Its a moment when she can see all the things she lacks,
and puts her self down without taking a second glace.
Its a moment when the music seems too pause,
and her thoughts get messed up making her confused.
Its a moment when life doesnt seem so great,
and she makes her self ready to give up the fight.

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Its a Random.
It not finished,
but its ment to show
moments i have when ii feel soo down,
so alone soo ugly so unloved.
When i just wanna give up.
You dont have too like it,
and if u dont tell me why :)
i rather bad comments than good,
because bad ones u can learn from
=]
xx

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nikko McMorbid

    Loved it. (-_-) huhuhu dam*

  • 16 years ago

    by Beyond Repair

    Your right it doesn't make alot of sense but neither does depression. I think what you got going is really great you might want to move stuff around and give it a quick rewrite if your not adding more. Let me know when your finished with it and ill rate and comment it then. My "Stripped of my Sense" is about depression, if you want to give it a read. This has potential to be amazing, keep it going. ~Zach