You are my past.

by Mr Rhee   Nov 3, 2007


Give me your heart. Give me your soul. Give me your visions and dreams. I'll even take your hopes. I might even take your blood.

All this will be mine. All this will be my bed.
It will be my food, my drink, my laughter.
These will be the staples for my feasts.

And you will suffer. Oh yes, you will suffer.
For all I leave you is your pain. Your hurts.
And all that you have, and will, bleed.
Because you are nothing. Nothing more than that which I have left behind...forever. You are my bleeding heart. You are my past.

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  • 15 years ago

    by SolemnWish

    It was short sorry
    but it was good
    MAybe you can do an updated version in the future?
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ken

    Even tho it was short i still felt the emotion from it. It was just right 5/5*.

  • 17 years ago

    by sweet escape

    I like it..... it is just dark enough....check out my poems plz

  • 17 years ago

    by Neil Marsden

    Great read, brim full of emotions both good and bad. Back from years away from writing, dont leave it 20 yrs again or we wont be able to understand you quite so well!
    Neil.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm.. what a great piece! i just noticed that ur past still u cant let it go... hmm am i right?coz i really felt the emotions was truly undeniable hehe.. well i can relate at the same time coz of those few lines seems related to me.. the message was powerful and very well expressed.. u had really showed ur deep emotions here perfectly.. keep on writing all what u feel .... great job 5/5

    its me,
    Sweet lig

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