I liked this piece, It held alot of emotion throughout it. The feelings you portrayed were deep and intense though I wasn't so keen on the ending because I felt as if this poem could of showed your love not the depressing side of your friend leaving. I'm sure they will be back. I still give this a 5/5 because the ending is just my personal opinon. Well done ~Mel

Nice poem,, Dedicated well.. I like the ending,,, the flow and the emotion was perfect,,, I can feel how valuable he is for you... Hope the situation getting better,,
Good job,, keep up the good work..
5/5

Good!

For this one, I notice the simplicity of it..I kind a combination of love and sad poem...Friendship?
Although for me its short, you really conveyed your message on it!

keep it up!

Ecellent poem very heartfelt and true, the words really touch the reader especially if they've experienced the same pain. The whole thing about not knowing what you have until it's gone comes into play, and how easily and fast it can all be taken away. Great job 5/5 GG23

Hmm i like the message it was very touch piece! the essence of this poet was really great and i think it has great dedication to everyone! just keep on writing all what u feel im sure it helps u alot to express ur feelings for writing it. great job keep it up! nice flow and it well written 5/5

god bless!

Hey... i love that you're getting out all of your emotions... just try to make it flow a little more:)

abcede

Wow!A truly amazing poem.Loved it!I didn't really like the way it was set up but other then that it was an excellent poem(no suprise :D)Anyways 5/5 from me again.

<3Amber