Little Star

by Natalie   Nov 4, 2007


It's in the sky
It shines so bright
If you stare up at it
It's like a great light

It will never fall down
It never gives up
It can help forget reality
It will feel like winning the world cup

It hides itself during the day
But it will shine again tomorrow
It's always full of happiness
It's never portraying any sorrow

If you stare at it long
If you that could be you
You just might get lost
And wish upon that little star too

By: Natalie R.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lenny

    The grammar is a bit iffy. Few fix ups needed. The imagery could be worked on, don't let yourself get constricted by the bounds of structure, loosen it up a bit more, create some vivid imagery!

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