As One We Stand

by Erickson   Nov 4, 2007


The rain has gone
Finally I can see the sun
The pain has been solved
and don't live here anymore
love and fraternity live now in us
hate and brutality turn into trust
As one we pray for better days to come
As one we trace the path to love
As one we make a happy home
As one we stand...

The love has come
Finally we can feel this one
insecurity was surpassed
and we don't want it anymore
respect and fidelity live now in us
jealousy and distrust turn into trust
As one we pray for better days to come
As one we trace the path to love
As one we make a happy home
As one we stand...

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  • 16 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww... I like it! I love the concept of "As one we stand" and how as one, 'we do everything together'.
    Great job! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Nawa

    Nice one, the words though simple express great emotions of love. Great job.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alexandraa

    Beautiful

  • 18 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You make so much sense here and it's so simple to understand. You also have a unique sense in organization. This definitely deserves a 5.

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