People think

by alwayssofresh16   Nov 4, 2007


Some people think he's not my type
they say he's old and I am ripe
they tell me not to go with him
that I'm going out on a limb

but I think he's the guy for me
It's just not everyone can see
that he's the type that can make me smile
we can share laughs for a while

some one I can go th when I need to talk
or when I'm not happy we can take a walk
and talk about whats wrong with me
but thats not what the people see

they see someone who acts a pimp
thinks he's cool with a limp
so maybe I should leave him be
he's just not the right guy for me

If you comment be as honest as can be so I know what I have to work on.

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  • Again, you can put this into stanzas, so it can look better. Very nice poem though. I'll still give you 5/5.

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