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I can relate. |
by Marc Ortiz
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You and your bf. (correct me if I'm wrong) must've shared something special... I wish you all the best. TC |
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This is really good! keep it up! |
by Fsams
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Great love poem with strong overflowing feelings depicted. I love how you have described your feelings :) |
by A l y s s a
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Wow, this is a really great poem. excellent use of words. i loved it. :) |
by Samantha
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I love this poem It's really great... |
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Very nice!! I love this poem!! |
by jordan
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This is a very good poem. i feel this way for my bofriend. |
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Very good poem. You should put it into stanzas so it could look better. 4/5 for now. |
by Nigel Oliver
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This was very nice, |
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Love it=) |
by Liz
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My fiance and I both work and i dont get to see him much, i love your poem, it did what a poem is supposed to do and thats take the reader to that place or feeling that have felt or want to feel. Flow and Rhyme scheme good. 5/5 ^.^ |