Comments : I miss it when you...

  • 16 years ago

    by Joseph R Hanna

    I can relate.

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    You and your bf. (correct me if I'm wrong) must've shared something special... I wish you all the best. TC

  • 16 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    This is really good! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Great love poem with strong overflowing feelings depicted. I love how you have described your feelings :)

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    Wow, this is a really great poem. excellent use of words. i loved it. :)

    Ally. x

  • 16 years ago

    by Samantha

    I love this poem It's really great...

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very nice!! I love this poem!!

  • 16 years ago

    by jordan

    This is a very good poem. i feel this way for my bofriend.

  • Very good poem. You should put it into stanzas so it could look better. 4/5 for now.

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    This was very nice,
    I can relate to this a lot.
    Your rhyming scheme was really good, and the flow was flawless.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by anonymous lyrell

    Love it=)

  • 15 years ago

    by Liz

    My fiance and I both work and i dont get to see him much, i love your poem, it did what a poem is supposed to do and thats take the reader to that place or feeling that have felt or want to feel. Flow and Rhyme scheme good. 5/5 ^.^