Inspiring

This was pretty well done but I felt it was mediocre compared to your last piece. It seemed to short and to simple, it was still written well and had the flow but it was just missing the knockout punch. I gave this a 4/5 good job

That is absoultely breath taking.
I love it.

Winks
rise with wonder.

Feelings
flow through guidance.

Blood
pours pure passion
^^^
I love these three stanza's
they just are like the final puzzels pieces to the puzzel

Very nice one! I like the flow, the end and also the other stanza's.

Merits
mark your victory.
So true but I still love the line. Nicely written.

Wow, i loved this.

This poem... is so inspiring...

Your stanza's where.. all very beautiful
And incredible poem...
Its.. so deep.. and true

i love it.

i'm also adding it to my favorite poems..
5/5

Its seems to me you are talking about us, poets! Am I right???
Beautiful poem, much is said with so few work.
It deserves a 5/5!

Take care,
Ingrid