by Sweet lig
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Its nice and very touch. all the lines seems interesting so i think its good and hope u win! keep it up!5/5 |
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This is great, the emotion flowed very well. Definitely 5/5!!! |
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Have I commented this one? Sorry if I have. Oh this is really great. I can relate to this one. 5/5 |
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Congratulations on finding one you love so much, it is truly a magnificent feat and you express it very well in this poem. Great job! |
by Melpomene
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I liked this poem alot, I found it to be beautiful and i'm sure your guy would love this piece alot. The emotions portrayed were sweet and kind hearted. I could really feel them spill over me while reading this warming my heart. A good piece. ~Mel |
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Its sweet!! |
by Nigel Oliver
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I loved this, its was simply beautiful |
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This poem is great... At the start It reminded me of someone... I really loved this poem... |
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This is really beautiful the wording is great and so is the flow... |
by Kaila
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I liked it |
by lish
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Again awesome! |
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YES BABY, I AM UR ANGEL. |