Very well written flows well and has alot of emotion.

"But I will fight
So I can actually feel", this is so emotional, a perfect 5/5.

This is an amazing poem. Very well written!!! 5/5 from me!!!

Well I stupidly read this poem in the wrong order but I think this poem is great. It is heartfelt and I love the story unraveling in this sequence. Good job!

This was really a powerful piece hold some powerful stanzas within it. I definitly could feel the emotions which you portrayed into this deep within my heart. It captured me and took my breathe away. Loved the ending of this it fitted in nicely. Overall a great read. ~Mel

Rly emotional sad... i like it though

Very well done...such a sad poem..

It was nicely penned,
Very discriptive...

This peom is sad but inspirational....you are very talented don't let anything stop you...

Interesting. i lkie it. it had a nice flow and a wonderful rythm. good job 5/5

The ending was beautiful and the flow was great you r a really good poet

Ohhh how sad I really enjoyed it. Now I feel the emotion and everything good job

This was so emotionally. It's like sadness was flowing off the pages. Heartbreaking, yet wonderful to read.

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GOOD POEM, BUT I DON'T LIKE IT CAUSE U WROTE IT FOR HIM.

Very emotional,touching :) i loved