Remember (Part 3: Last Part)

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Nov 6, 2007


I remember the bliss
That touched us that
The wind blew
Through our precious relationship

Your body next to mine
The heat that was made
And with that style
Our souls gave in

I remember that night
In which you met me
All those sensual touches
That you gave me

I remember all of those words
That you said to me
Telling me the secret
That love does exist

But everything started changing
Everyone started getting in between
They were trying to change your mind
To get you away from me

During that time
I wasn't thinking right
That the passion between us
Was making me feel like a hostage

You drowned in your tears
And your pain
I didn't know what was going on
With my feelings

Then I heard
The whole world say
That because of me
You were gonna destroy your life

I didn't believe in your words
I ignored you like a dog
And now look at you
Your funeral is tomorrow

Lying down in that box
Unable to move
Everyone cries for you
And they judge me without knowing

That is was a mistake
That I didn't have my eyes wide open
My love forgive me
Even though you are gone

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THIS IS A POEM I HAD WRITTEN FOR A GUY I WAS WITH WHO DIED. R.I.P. ANTHONY ALVAREZ (85-05). I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU AND KEEP YOU IN MY HEART.

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  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    R.I.P., NOW I HAVE HER!

  • 16 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    I'm so sorry for your loss. It's heartbreaking. I like how you've put your sorrow into your writing, and produced a wonderful set of poems.

    Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hermosa

    That was so emotional i read all three parts good job! Im sorry you lost him. Its always very difficult to lose a loved one! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Again the emotion was good nice ending to a series wonderful job

  • 16 years ago

    by alwayssofresh16

    Again another great poem i love part 1 2 and three keep up the good work 5/5