For Eternity

by ihrtschlepper   Nov 6, 2007


You are the sun of my day,
the moon of my night.
life without you
is unthinkable...

You're the star that leads me
home every night,
the cloud that protects me
during the day

to simply say "i love you"is not enough,
for what i feel is so much more.
but words will only fail me.
so i do love you,
but for more than just today
i love you...
FOR ETERNITY!

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  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Eh. Its deffinately a good start. There is an onvious emotion in this poem, any reader can feel it. However the structure is deffinately lacking. There like is no flow or rhyme&reason for any placement. Like with some minor adjusments it could be amazing
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  • 16 years ago

    by starcrossedlvr

    Aww this poem is cute and juss gets to the point that words are not enough to explain how ur heart and body feels when ur around that special someone...

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